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PostPosted: Fri May 15, 2020 6:11 pm    Post subject: Dog Bite Reply with quote

an old tune me, my brother and a friend wrote when we were kids. i decided to do write a solo and produce the track.

https://www.reverbnation.com/brianblevins/song/31820711-dlj-dog-bite

i think it has lyrics but i have no idea what they are so there are no vocals on this track.

that is Mike on the throne if anyone cares.
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PostPosted: Sat May 16, 2020 3:06 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Great solo Brian, you killed it. I really like the "Prog-ish" elements in some of the sections. Love the keyboards @ :47, wish that motif had lasted longer.

Out of curiosity, what's the story behind the title if there is one?
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PostPosted: Sat May 16, 2020 9:56 am    Post subject: thank you Reply with quote

a_zimuth wrote:

Out of curiosity, what's the story behind the title if there is one?


Beer I guess Smile. I do not remember seriously.

I will listen that part at 47s and see what I can do there. I think I have a rogue key part playing where I do not want it too. It is pissing me off really because I am not able to find what the hell it is. I must have a track hidden reaper BUT it does not play when I am playing the tune but only shows up when I render. Odd.

Thanks for listening and commenting.
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PostPosted: Sat May 16, 2020 9:58 am    Post subject: ahh that part Reply with quote

[quote="a_zimuth"]Great solo Brian, you killed it. I really like the "Prog-ish" elements in some of the sections. Love the keyboards @ :47, wish that motif had lasted longer./quote]

i remember now. that started as a guitar part but the guitars were stepping on each there so i switched. i can mess around and make it longer i am sure to see how it sounds.

there is a really killer part my brother wrote for the end that I have no clue how he did it so i made a new riff at the end. not even close to what he did in the cool dept.
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PostPosted: Sat May 16, 2020 11:15 am    Post subject: what about this? Reply with quote

i just repeated the part but lowered the volume of the direct synth but increased the pre-fader send to the verb to push it back some.

i want the guitar rhythm front there backing off the guitars and getting more guitar oriented.
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PostPosted: Mon May 18, 2020 11:55 am    Post subject: i made a bunch of mix changes Reply with quote

for those who already listened, you may like this version more.

for those who haven't i hope you like it.

brian
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PostPosted: Mon May 18, 2020 12:24 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

almost reminds me of Tom Sawyer Smile
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PostPosted: Mon May 18, 2020 9:50 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I like that Brian, sounds much more cohesive now. I agree with Jason that I'm getting a Rush vibe from parts of it, more during their Grace Under Pressure period though. Really well done.
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PostPosted: Tue May 19, 2020 10:43 am    Post subject: thx for the huge complement Reply with quote

rush prior to power windows is some of my favorite stuff.
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