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Ralph [RZ]
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Dude, you and Mike C. are on a roll!
Love the song, the arrangement, mix, everything. What module did you use for the drum sounds?
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Knopf_
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| Hey, here is a talented one! I find it a great composition and production. I like very much mixes like this, with a very raw sound, almost as the musicians were playing a couple of meters of me. Like in Ralph’s land would be said: alle Achtung! |
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Jae.Thomas
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The vocals need work but thank you!!!
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jas_lan
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It sounds great! Nice work.
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Azimuth
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| Quote: | | The vocals need work but thank you!!! |
That was the only element that I felt was kind of "iffy" myself. The vocals felt "contrived" and forced to fit the genre. The Guitar work is excellent however, really nice. |
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Jae.Thomas
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| I wouldn't say they are contrived, it's just not really a style I normally do so I don't think I'm hitting the notes as naturally as the previous song. I'm going to have to work on it, but I did compose it this way on purpose. It's a shaky. |
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Ralph [RZ]
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I have to say I actually like the vocals. It's that flair and style that goes with this type of music, for me. Like wearing a flamboyant hat at the right beach on the right day, if that makes any sense to anyone.
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Jae.Thomas
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| I just think there's a lot of near-misses with some of the pictures of the notes. I'm going to need to go into melodyne and see where I'm going wrong and maybe correct some of it Until I can perform at the right way. I'm going to have to play it out a bit at gigs |
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Azimuth
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| Actually Jason "contrived" is probably the wrong adjective, it wasn't meant in a negative way. Perhaps "forced" would be more appropriate. It just didn't sound like it was a natural flow for you and you were thinking during the performance instead of it just happening, if that makes sense. |
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Jae.Thomas
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| 100 percent correct!!! |
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Jae.Thomas
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| I would say that it's more conceptual and not as much in my heart - but I want it to get there, cause i do like it. But it needs some elbow great vocally |
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