Rayzoon Technologies LLC

b_macinan · Jam Meister Joined: 30 Jul 2008 Posts: 55

http://www.reverbnation.com/tunepak/1419629

Heaven on Earth

Ralph [RZ] · Site Admin Joined: 02 Jan 2008 Posts: 13332

Great sound, perfect mix, complex and unique harmonic development, awesome vocals...I really like this track! I know it's subjective but I wonder what it would sound like with the kick drum volume turned up more...
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b_macinan · Jam Meister Joined: 30 Jul 2008 Posts: 55

Ralph [RZ] · Site Admin Joined: 02 Jan 2008 Posts: 13332

Yes, maybe just EQ up the bottom-end.
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dysfunction · Jamologist Joined: 04 Aug 2007 Posts: 197

I agree with Ralph- beautiful song. I do think the kick needs to come up a good bit more, not just on the bottom end, and the solo guitar could come down just a little bit.
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b_macinan · Jam Meister Joined: 30 Jul 2008 Posts: 55

I agree with both of you... Should be a pretty easy fix. I'll see if I can get it done tonight after the Bruins game of course. I'll let you know when I update the mix.

GregHolmes · Posted: Tue May 05, 2009 12:31 pm Post subject:

I would echo that it's a great song, but that the bottom end (bass and kick) should come up. Cut some bottom from the guitars to make room. And try to get more "air" into the rhythm guitars (like Andy Summers' Tele, if that makes sense). The guitar distortion is a bit too much "fuzz" rather than "crunch". So the crescendos (when the guitars are full-out, e.g. around 1:45) seem to make the whole track sound distorted. This might be an artifact of the MP3 conversion. In a couple of spots, the guitars fight the lead vocals (although that's fine at the end of the song). You could use a bit of EQ or vocal-side-chained compression on the guitars. This should also give the background vocals some room to soar.
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sinbad · Jammer Joined: 18 Mar 2006 Posts: 29

Hey Mance - great songwriting and performances there. I've been listening to your other songs on Reverbnation - excellent stuff, respect.

kram_0 · Jammer Joined: 15 Sep 2009 Posts: 33

I've been going through the tracks posted here and this has been my favorite so far. Thanks for the music!

robojam_ · Jammer Joined: 24 Aug 2008 Posts: 45

Pretty good. Voice reminds me a little of later period Geddy Lee.

coco_co · Junior Jammer Joined: 15 Jan 2010 Posts: 18

Beautiful song, warm mix!
I like it!

Sun_Tzu · Jammer Joined: 10 Jul 2009 Posts: 33

Hey, I'm intrigued because of the reviews and I see that the link is dead.

Do you have it up anywhere else?