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Jae.Thomas
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Azimuth
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Hi Jason,
That song is so depresso that my Surface locked up hard after listening to it. No idea what happened there. Check the Bass note @ 5:35, sounds out of key to me. Not a criticism but I kept singing Hotel California in my head due to the chord progression. Nice work man. |
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Jae.Thomas
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| Posted: Mon Jun 29, 2020 6:21 pm Post subject: |
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| yeah that bridge is weird... hehe |
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Knopf_
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| I liked the song. I think the things out of key are intentional and part of the stethic, like the synth in 2:49, for example. Nice drumming. |
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Jae.Thomas
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I think the vocals are a good example of what's meaning to be out of key. I was going to do another take, and eventually I will, but I already like how they turned out.
I'll check out that synth, it could just be me putting a note in there that's "out" or it could be a mistake |
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Jae.Thomas
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| Posted: Wed Jul 01, 2020 8:25 am Post subject: |
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| Knopf_ wrote: | | I liked the song. I think the things out of key are intentional and part of the stethic, like the synth in 2:49, for example. Nice drumming. |
that's guitar and yes it's intentional hahaha but I didn't consider it out, just a far too gradual slide  |
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C_Holdz
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| Hey that song isn’t bad man. |
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Grem_Songs
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| I enjoyed listening. Yes it was, moody. But not sure about depresso!! Not for me anyway. I might have to listen more closely to the words. At work right now and was just listening to it. Good work on the drums. I liked the atmosphere you created. Just enough space to breath. |
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Burakov_Anatoly
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this is not the first track of yours that i listen to, and not the first track i notice a heavy (early) Muse influence in  are you a fan by any chance?
although to be fair, this is more of a Jeff Buckley vibe than straight up Muse, but same difference! this gave me goosebumps... |
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Jae.Thomas
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hey, thank you! There are a couple of things I want to change on it, but I do consider this pretty much done.
And those are two bands/acts I truly enjoy so thanks again for THAT |
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