Rayzoon Technologies LLC

[jorkke_]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0AxOtJIzGnQ

Charlie was too shy to show himself

[p356]

Nicely done song. Artsy but not too much.

[Sheppol_A]

Great sound

C4C

[kram_0]

Hey jorkke_!
I quite like your track - catchy tune.
Now for my comments; I think that the drums are pretty pedestrian and could be made little more interesting by including a shuffle to match the piano part. I think that this could add a bit of breathing space for some ghosts and other variations without changing the feel.
Also, the piano sounds a bit "General MIDI" to me. I'm not sure how it's played but I would give it a bit more character and take the edge off it a little.
The mix is good and the vocal performance is really nice.
Of course, it's only my personal opinion...
Good work!!

[chesterdesmond]

Charlie= pretty pedestrian

[b_macinan]

excellent voice.. I love the chorus. The video is ok... but I'm really no video expert... or any kind of expert for that matter . I really like the chorus and the voice though... tremendous.

[james_toffee]

Hi jorkke_

Sounding nice Simple, straight-forward. I am listening on headphones. On the verses, I can't always make out the lyrics....maybe piano a bit turned down or voice bumped up.

Thanks for sharing.

James